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For Prince Elatus by ~october1983:iconoctober1983:



The wingèd Prince doth shed a tear,
Lamenting for his subject dear,
Cleaved in two, a bird once grand,
Now splintered in its master's hand.

No comfort in his mother's arms;
Limited are Queenly charms,
For beauty cannot resurrect,
And so the bird remains a wreck.

A wandering traveller happens upon
The radiant Queen and her sad son,
Without a word, he takes the toy,
And steals it from the Atavian boy.

But unbeknownst to His Highness,
The traveller plans an act of kindness,
And bends his steps past royal maid,
To find the bird some better aid.

For if any in the land can fix
The Prince's toy - 'tis Perdix!
And sure enough, with paint and glue,
It is fixed as though 'twere new.

In the Palace, the Prince still mourns;
All manner of heavenly foods he scorns -
Even Lucinda's finest sweet,
Cannot tempt the boy to eat.

Suddenly! In the stranger strides,
Leaves the toy by the Prince's side,
A kindly smile upon his face,
He bows and leaves with reverent grace.

Onto the bird Elatus bounds -
Through Arcadia his joy resounds,
His wingèd toy, ever adorèd,
Has been so lovingly restorèd.
©2006-2009 ~october1983
:iconoctober1983:

Author's Comments

My first, and possibly only (I forget) submission to the Bardics, a some what tongue in cheek take on an Achaean quest - I think it didn't do well because it basically tells you how to do the quest. Oh well!

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:icongnaash:
Yeah, I'd agree with your assessment. Probably too revealing of how to do the actual quest. Because, artistically, I've seen much worse on the winner's stand.

Cheers.

--
Just Gnaash.
:iconoctober1983:
Yea, thank you. I don't pretend that I'm much of a writer - my writing is neither prolific nor of a particularly high quality, but I like to think I have a fairly good sense of humour about me when I do write. This was basically just an attempt at sending up a certain style of poetry that I spent far too much time reading at school last year!
:iconoctober1983:
*snicker* Or not - I resubmitted it this month as a joke, and got merit.

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